addie bundren’s posthumous sermon
6 October 2008
In a pew you can’t recline much;
not much leg-room either.
Soon they’ll be a few folk walking the aisles
like stewardesses on a plane, but for now it’s the
(((wooshhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
of words like pressurized air motorin’ past ears
shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
…stormin’ the shoreline of every sound
wooshhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
,,,to assault them,,,to erode them all.
shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh)))
Some words are “just shapes to fill a lack”—white-noise—
words without color
,,,words never felt
,,,over-said words that disappear like contrails miles behind the lectern
(there’s a majesty in the clouds, though;;;clouds fill up to break loose).
It’s writ “the word became flesh;” words that don’t
incarnate ain’t no good words;;;they just
words
without no fillin’;;;words which mock the majesty above.
7 October 2008 at 10:23 am
Shiiiiiiit!!!! I love this man!!!!!!!! Nine thumbs up! In a gist. I love this. I really really do. The imagery, voice, wordplay, all of it. Great.
7 October 2008 at 3:09 pm
Wow, you write amazing stuff. Thanks for commenting at CW so I could read it.
9 October 2008 at 1:07 pm
Excellent! A very inventive, creative post!
9 October 2008 at 5:44 pm
Creative take on the prompt! Nice!!
10 October 2008 at 1:27 am
Economy of words doesn’t mean you have nothing to say. some people speak for hours without saying anything.
11 October 2008 at 3:03 am
That was a terrific little dissertation.
30 October 2008 at 5:00 am
wow. this is great. glad I checked out the entries at Cafe Writing – I almost forgot.
8 November 2008 at 10:24 pm
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